The writing has slowed down. I feel like I’m in completely new territory. I did an outline of what I’d like to show during day two and it’s something like this:
INT. SMALL’S BAR – AFTERNOON
The bar is empty. Lou is sitting at the bar watching TV when Sam walks in.
Sam is still covered in mud from the tumble he took before.
Hey, Sam. Glad to see you made it home safely last night.
Yeah. Thanks for that.
Lou gets up and walks behind the bar. He grabs the bottle of scotch and pulls out a tumbler.
Lou pours him a scotch on the rocks and places the glass on a napkin in front of Sam.
Sam seems distant, lost in thought. He places his hands near his head mimicking a prayer. The Woman is sitting on the bar stool next to him. He ignores her. He holds out his hands to see how steady they are and neither of them are shaking.
You know what, Lou?
Sam pulls off his wedding ring and drops it in the scotch.
I’m done drinking. How about a water?